Focus Group Feedback

Recently I presented my ideas to the rest of my class. I explained my ideas of using the woods and a sinister story-line and then how, through the lyrics, I thought of using a stalker. We also re-played the song so they could listen and even played it over the start of 'Winter Stalker'.

Here are a few suggestions that people made:

• Include lip-syncing in the form of writing and mouthing the lyrics - possibly writing a letter.
• Using black blood instead of red blood - could prevent it become clichéd.
• Keep the idea of Kristie running through the forest.
• Whilst some agreed with the video being sinister, a couple of people questioned this.
• The best suggestion and idea I was given was whether the stalker should be male or female.

I found the discussion really useful, as a first form of audience feedback. I was also intrigued by the idea of using another female as the 'stalker' character so I would like to look into it more.

'Stalker' Inspiration

Whilst looking for some inpsiration I came accross this video on Vimeo:


The Winter Stalker from Stephen Reedy+ZerofriendsFilms on Vimeo.


'The Winter Stalker' is an extremely creepy short holiday horror film by Stephen Reedy and Alex Pardee. When I started watching it I actually found it very scary! Obviously the end is completely different, but I love some of the shots included. I also really like the low key lighting and the mix of slow motion and normal paced shots.

I even tried playing my track over the beginning of the video and it went really well! This has convinced me to change my idea slightly to a concept of the girl being 'stalked'.

Idea Developments

When I looked over my first idea again, I found that it sounded much too cliche, so I went back to the lyrics! After I read them through  a few times I tried to think of some slightly different ideas.

Eventually I recognised some lyrics as almost 'idolising' the subject of the song. For example;
"I see your blood is liquid light"

"Your teenage eyes"

"Your glittering gut parts to the dawn"

Not only do these lyrics create great imagery, they also highlight some aspects that I would like to make key in my video, especially the age and innocence of Kristie. This gave me the concept of her being 'stalked' by another person.

First Concept/Narrative Idea

I came up with the idea of Kristie running/exploring in the forest (loads of opportunities for different shots). Every now and then she turns around and laughs/smiles at camera -- but within these shots there is a flashback/forward (the audience don't know) of her running terrified... kind of like a graphic match of her two expressions.

She finally runs to this odd, run down hut thing (it's in the forest near my house) and goes inside. She finds a piece of broken mirror (referred to in the lyrics) and picks it up. When she looks in it, her reflection has blood all over her face.

She touches her face but there is no blood. As she goes to leave, she sees a girl and a scary figure (haven't decided what he looks like yet) struggling and watches from inside the hut. She witnesses the man kill the girl and leave, so she runs to help the girl. As she does so she drops the piece of mirror.

She runs to help the girl, but when she arrives at the place she doesn't find a body, just an identical piece of mirror to the one she dropped. She looks in it once again and sees blood on her face, and the audience see the reflection of the scary man standing behind her. He mouthes the last lyrics "Baby you're never gonna let it go" just as the song finishes.

Ideas and Developments

So far I have decided a few things:

• I would like the video to be sinister.
• I would like to have some lyrics/visual relationships.
• I want a young woman to be featured in the video, as the main focus.
• I will feature some lip-synching from a male.
• I will use the forest as a main location for the video.

With regards to casting my artist/girl I already have people in mind. For the male artist, who will be doing the lip syncing I would like to use my brother, James. 

I have asked a friend, Kristie, to play the part of a girl. She is 14 and has done some professional modelling. She has the perfect look I was picturing for my video. This also means she will be good at taking direction and look great on a digi-pack and magazine advert.

Looking for a Location

As I live fairly close to the forest, I walked up there to take a few photographs of possible filming locations for my music video.

There is this really great ruined hut in the forest which I would love to incorporate into my video too!

Texts Featuring Forests

After the initial inpiration of using the woods and forest in my music video, I wanted to do some research into other music videos, adverts and films which feature this location.



This music video is for the band HEALTH's song "We Are Water". Although it's incredibly gory and very sinister I do quite like the video. I am especially attracted to the lighting and the use of slow motion. Another aspect I find really interesting is the visible snow/particles falling through the air... it almost adds a sense of calm to the horrific scene.


This is a trailer for the 2007 horror film "Shrooms". I have watched the film a few times and they manage to make the woods look really, really creepy. This is possibly down to the mist that is present in a lot of scenes in the forest.


Paramore's music video for 'Decode' is set in the forest for both the concept part and the performance part of the music video. I especially love the tracking shots which are sped up, it creates a really sinister but interesting effect; especially when the camera dodges the trees! It also features clips from the film 'Twilight'.


I found this music promo on Vimeo. It is for a band called Black Black Hills and there is a really interesting paragraph below the video which tells you what the director's inspiration was. This is what they said:
"The outcome of our efforts was a unique take on the idea of a modern gothic thriller. A story that combines the sort of imagery familiar to ancient folklore, pagan-esque ceremonies and the creepy stuff of ‘pulp literature’ style ghost stories. ‘The Celebration’ purposefully sets out to embrace the notion of a ‘British Mythology’. To create a contemporary fable that celebrates the mystifying forces of nature which lie deep within the ancient woodland and forests of rural England."
I really like the idea of using ghost stories and the local area to create a music video!


I also remembered seeing this advert on television a few months ago. It's for a newly opened ride at Alton Towers "TH13TEEN". A very scary advert to be shown on television if you ask me! The slogan is "If you go down to the woods today, you better not go alone" which I'm sure people would obey after seeing the advert. Again the use of fog in the forest and high contrast creates very sinister silhouettes and outlines of the trees against the grey sky. The black branches also create a strong contrast with the girl's white dress and pale skin, like a battle between good and evil.